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Be Careful
Briana King's life is falling apart. Her beloved father has just died, and her controlling mother wants to boss her eighteen-year-old around as though Briana were still eight. Strange dreams seem par for the course. But what about dreams that leave evidence behind?
With the help of an ancient coin left to her by her father, Briana discovers a world to which she can travel bodily every time she sleeps, a world where magic is real and freedom is the dream. But what can one girl do against the totalitarian Peace Keepers, even with the help of the mysterious Rebel Underground and their taciturn (and oh-so-alluring) boy leader Caiden North? And with her dreams so engrossing, will Briana ever want to wake up?
Be Careful includes some strong language and violence. Suggested readers are teens to adults.
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Very Nice!
Emeralds — March 10, 2010 - 5:13amInteresting story (is it going to be similar to another story by the same title that I know?) - looking forward to reading more.
Em
Very sound advice
Kat (not verified) — December 30, 2009 - 10:53amI'm interested on what happens next... hmmmm :P
Very nice
sqdancerkh — August 2, 2009 - 1:46pmVery nice and interesting. I can't wait to see what happens!
Dun Dun Dun
LupineMoon (not verified) — June 22, 2009 - 8:24amI really enjoyed this. Is this somewhat based on our version of BC?
A bittersweet beginning. Can't wait for more.
Nice first chapter! It sounds
Flormarina — June 8, 2009 - 2:57amNice first chapter! It sounds very interesting and I'm definitely looking forward to the twists and turns that I know this story will make. Amaing job and keep at it. It's fantastic.
Taina
Very cool so far, an
Kiana (not verified) — June 7, 2009 - 1:09amVery cool so far, an interesting take on a fanfiction story thats worked so well
Name defines form much?
GrimSqueakerName defines form much? :P
But this looks to have some interesting twists on it... some very fun ones, too. I wonder where we go from here.
Well this is familar
The World Walker — June 5, 2009 - 8:00amHmm I recognize this plot but I can't wait to see what diffrences you put in
Even if it's just the first
PhoenixEven if it's just the first chapter, great work you two. I like the charakter of Briana, and the apparent mystery being her surname.
Nix
Oooh, interesting. I like.
DangamsOooh, interesting. I like. Briana's character is very well written. Congratulations to both of you.