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Chapter 2: Pyres and Nightwalkers
I was a bit stuck on how to introduce the topic of my water jug the next morning. “Excuse me, but someone’s trying to poison me and I think it might be you” isn’t the best opening line for conversation over breakfast. Especially if the person you’re talking to was the cook.
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Definitely interesting. All
Scott MDefinitely interesting. All is not as it seems, indeed...I'm curious to see what pyre-trees are, who were/are Todd's friends, and also more about the Murcani. Pretty much everything, really. ;-)
Shiny. Gimme more :P
GrimSqueakerShiny.
Gimme more :P
I really like this story so
elven_hobbit — May 26, 2009 - 9:59amI really like this story so far. It has lots of intrigue right out the gate. Can't wait for the next update!
Chapter is looking good, and
kiana291630 — May 25, 2009 - 11:08amChapter is looking good, and the start of a plot and a bit of mystery is always good
Oooooh!
FrancesYay! I can't wait for more. The plot thickens and things become more and more interesting... I wonder who he will meet by the tree!
Yay! More plot and mystery!
chaoschild — May 24, 2009 - 2:45pmYay!
More plot and mystery! So exciting!
Much love
The plot thickens
kezzyc — May 24, 2009 - 9:08amI'm betting the men have gotten tired of people like Todd's mother and have run off. Maybe we'll get to meet some of them later in the story. Overall, this is reminding me of the Pelbar Chronicles, which tell the story of a post nuclear apocalypse earth. Looking forward to reading more.
Ohh, it get's more
PhoenixOhh, it get's more interessting. I'm really sure it was just an accident that the water wasn't good to drink. Just like in earlier times, somebody accidently pour some poison in the king's wine ...
I like Todd, if only because his mother seems to have a problem with her own son, but Todd seems to really want his people's secrets to be known.
Can't wait for the next chapter, Anne, very good work
Nix
Nice. Things seem to be
DangamsNice. Things seem to be getting more interesting...
Have all the men really between eat by these nightwalkers? Or has something else happened? And that can't be good for a population...