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I admit I smiled when I saw the name Alexander and the description of black hair and green eyes, but that didn't make me fall back into the Dangerverse. I was captured fromthe beginning and if I had never read the Dangerverse stories would have been intrigued by your hero from the get go. I certainly enjoyed the re-Naming of the brownies to get them out from under Alexander's father's thumb. The flow of words and descriptions is smooth and I never once had to stop and re-apply my suspension of disbelief.

The two modern day characters seem to be decently well-rounded and though (having read both of your bios) I can see a hint of what could possibly be considered a bit of self-insertion, it doesn't interfere with good characterizations. Besides, my first undergraduate English professor always told me the best thing you can do is to write what you know.

"Effing Jeff" reminds me of too many people that I've had to deal with over my lifetime. Is he going to be a throwaway walk-on character or does he have other appearances to come. I admit it wouldbe fun to see him get what's coming to him. Karma is a wonderful thing, don't you think?

I'm very curious to find out who the elderly gentleman is and just what that book is.

Rather than add a bunch of questions to this review, I'm going ot go head and read teh remaining chapters that you've posted and then give you a big review at the end of the last posting as I suspect some of my questions will be answered shortly. Again, a lovely first chapter.

Very truly yours,

Dancingkatz

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